Amanda, the conversation between the couple arguing is a little off. One scene goes to one person and then clips back to the same person. Same for the other. The sound is a little gritty in the kitchen scene. Glad you made the beginning short and LOVE the dog. Great actor. Your story board is good.
Amanda,
ReplyDeletethe conversation between the couple arguing is a little off. One scene goes to one person and then clips back to the same person. Same for the other. The sound is a little gritty in the kitchen scene. Glad you made the beginning short and LOVE the dog. Great actor. Your story board is good.