Self Critique

For my final edit I decided to simplify a bit and take the dog's voice out. I thought it was a cute idea, but im not sure how to work the dog in with the way that everything was shot. I am going back closer to my original idea and sticking to a more serious point.I also did some work on the audio. I added presence many spots (especially in the area in the kitchen). For my menu, I revised completely and made much softer on the eyes. Im pretty happy with how this homework assignment went over because I am much more comfortable and familiar with the programs this week.